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potrygirl
Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 23
Peoria, Arizona, United States

0 posted 2000-02-29 10:05 PM


Sorry it's been a while but here goes and Thank you for taking the time to stop at my title.

Write

People used to ask me why I write, I gave them a
    simple answer.
I write when I feel the need to express an emotion.
I now sit here at four in the morn and feel that
    need.
I wish you were near so I could tell you my every
    emotion yet this pen must do my work.
What do I say i never a question my hand is just
    here to keep the pen standing.
It moves quickly and without a problom.
Never taking a break, controlling it's own destiny.
My simple answer to why I write, my pen starts
    moving.

-Stacye Walters-

© Copyright 2000 Stacey Carroll - All Rights Reserved
First__Knight
Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

1 posted 2000-03-01 12:44 PM


Wonderful shared thoughts in this.  Writing does the mind good  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


faith
Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89

2 posted 2000-03-01 01:40 AM


Hey pg..u r soo write ..when i m down and i have no one to share it with me i write....this pen and paper , if we put it to use...can really work up wonders! faith
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-03-01 02:36 AM


This was wonderfully written, well done

This is something I wrote along time ago and I thought it appropriate to share it here....

In verse we express innermost feelings and thoughts, through poetry I find a creative and expressive way of showing my emotions.
Sleepless nights with overactive brain activity put to work for hours of expressive writing, through which I gain great pleasure and reward.


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

potrygirl
Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 23
Peoria, Arizona, United States
4 posted 2000-03-01 06:07 PM


Thanks guys these are great I especially like yours Tracie thanks

Stacye

poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
5 posted 2000-03-01 09:43 PM


potrygirl: i like your explaination   simple and stirring... i think that's the reason most of us write *heh*... it's a force beyond our control... keep up the good work...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

 And their bleating was like a wet salmon
slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap!

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