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Teen Poetry #2

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JennyeMeshan
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-02-28 05:17 PM

This reminds me of my crazy life!!

The stranger sang a theme,
From someone else's dream,
The leaves began to fall,
And no one spoke at all,
But I can't seem to recall,
When you came along, Ingune,
I just dont know what to do,
The tree lined avenue,
Begins to fade from view,
Drowning past regrets,
In tea and cigarettes,
But I can't seem to forget,
When you came along, Ingune.
~JeNnYeMeShAn~

"If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

1 posted 2000-02-29 11:05 AM

Jennye~
Ya know, you shouldn't be talking about cigarettes here in the forums....

Ha, Ha! Anyhoo, I like your poem, and I'm sorry that I'm not giving much of a response, but my brain is elsewhere today. But hey, that's life sometimes. Talk to ya later.

Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

2 posted 2000-02-29 05:15 PM

jennye: this was enchanting and rather charming, i'd say... i particularly like the first two lines and (dare i say it?) the "tea and cigarettes" line... very creative...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

And their bleating was like a wet salmon
slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap!

rich-pa
Member

since 2000-02-07

Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana

3 posted 2000-02-29 07:10 PM

i dug it. and as jerome noted i really liked the tea and cigarettes line.

rich-pa

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