Teen Poetry #2 |
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Life in Mono |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
This reminds me of my crazy life!! The stranger sang a theme, From someone else's dream, The leaves began to fall, And no one spoke at all, But I can't seem to recall, When you came along, Ingune, I just dont know what to do, The tree lined avenue, Begins to fade from view, Drowning past regrets, In tea and cigarettes, But I can't seem to forget, When you came along, Ingune. ~JeNnYeMeShAn~ "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Jennye~ Ya know, you shouldn't be talking about cigarettes here in the forums.... ![]() Ha, Ha! Anyhoo, I like your poem, and I'm sorry that I'm not giving much of a response, but my brain is elsewhere today. But hey, that's life sometimes. Talk to ya later. Love ya, Kristi Lynn |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
jennye: this was enchanting and rather charming, i'd say... i particularly like the first two lines and (dare i say it?) the "tea and cigarettes" line... very creative... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest And their bleating was like a wet salmon slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap! |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i dug it. and as jerome noted i really liked the tea and cigarettes line. rich-pa |
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