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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
As the day ends and it comes dusk, He waits patiently to hear from us. We can feel what he has to say, When we're on our knees and pray. He wants us to choose the right, So we won't see the blinding light. He can sence our eepest fears, And he shares the pain with our tears. Trials he'll guide us through, If our faith in hims stays true. He's always watching me and you, And his love and guidence will contiune. He's loving caring and kind, But him on earth you will not find. He looks down on us with tender love, His name is God from above. ©Misty ------------------ ©Misty For more Poems GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" [This message has been edited by Misty (edited 11-28-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Misty, this is a beautiful tribute.  ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Poetic Dreams Junior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 23Lindsa, OKlahoma United States |
Misty, this is a wonderful poem. Not many people write about God. I praise you for not being the same. For I too write poems about God, and I read them to my church. This poem is very well spoken. ------------------ ~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You have a nice poem here. This could be great if you smooth out the meter alittle. You have a great message but I found myself stumbling. With a little work this poem could be great!! In the 7th line is seens supposed to be sees. Keep up the good work. |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thank you for replying, and thanks Marilyn for the advice, it was an error in my typing! ------------------ ********************************************************* NOTE: If you would like to join my campain to, "STOP THE HATE!" Please visit my website and sign Up! Thanks the addy is: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644/stopthehate.html Please join and show you care! It means alot to me! *************************************************** ©Misty For more Poems GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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Bright Melody Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 37O'Fallon Illinois |
I love this. Sometimes with my own life I tend to lose sight of the important things. And I forget that there IS someone there that cares. Thanks for the insight. |
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Laura Mitchell Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76Cincinnati OH,45238 |
Once again, absolutely wonderful! |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thanks |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
I fixed the error! Thanks for telling me! ------------------ ©Misty For more Poems bye Misty GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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