The butterfly in the path.....

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Teen Poetry #2

The butterfly in the path.....

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-02-25 09:31 PM

enjoy the nobody..and the nothing
keeps good company
or so im told
and the lonely is that one constant
which refuses to grow old
im the butterfly in the path
swipe me away
and there will never be
any questions asked..

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2000-02-26 01:26 AM

This says a lot. Nicely done!

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

2 posted 2000-02-26 11:33 AM

Great job! Beautifully written. It definatly does say a lot, in such a simple way.

Salma

"Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

3 posted 2000-02-29 12:21 PM

jackal: this is brilliant... simply brilliant... i love it!! simple yet so profound... one of your best, i'd say...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

Disarm you with a smile
And leave you like they left me here
To wither in denial
The bitterness of one who's left alone
--[billy corgan]--

sunshine17
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA

4 posted 2000-02-29 11:05 AM

I really fliked your poem becuase it was about butterflies and I like them. It was really good keep up the good work.

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