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My World |
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Angela16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 37USA |
I've searched for you far and wide, This kind of love I'd hoped to find. I'm so glad I've found you your the special person that's been hiding in the back of my mind. You make me strong when I am weak, Your my voice when I can't speak. You give me hope when I can't go on. Your my sight when I make my self blind to the world. your my my comfort, your my sheild, you have my heart. And with you I never want to part. I'm a part of you, your a part of me, You My World. Angela |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Cool poem. I hope it all goes well. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice poem! Your expression is good and the poem flows. Good work! Danny |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
i can totally understand the feelings you have. i think your poem is very good. i feel the same way for someone eles. i hope eveerything works out for you. |
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Gadget28 Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33Miami, Florida United States |
I loved your poem! That's all I can say b/c I'm speechless!  |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Beautiful poem. That person seems very special to you. Keep up the great work! Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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