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since 1999-11-19
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0 posted 2000-02-21 04:46 PM

I've searched for you far and wide,
This kind of love I'd hoped to find.
I'm so glad I've found you
your the special person that's been hiding in the back of my mind.
You make me strong when I am weak,
Your my voice when I can't speak.
You give me hope when I can't go on.
Your my sight when I make my self blind to the world.
your my my comfort, your my sheild,
you have my heart.
And with you I never want to part.
I'm a part of you, your a part of me,
You My World.


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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
1 posted 2000-02-22 10:42 AM

Cool poem.  I hope it all goes well.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-02-22 10:46 AM

Nice poem!  Your expression is good and the poem flows.
Good work!

since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
3 posted 2000-02-22 11:34 AM

i can totally understand the feelings you have.  i think your poem is very good.  i feel the same way for someone eles.  i hope eveerything works out for you.
Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33
Miami, Florida United States
4 posted 2000-02-22 01:34 PM

I loved your poem! That's all I can say b/c I'm speechless!
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

5 posted 2000-02-22 08:10 PM

Beautiful poem. That person seems very special to you. Keep up the great work!


 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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