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Teen Poetry #2
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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
0 posted 2000-02-21 03:52 PM


Dreamy unaprochable mountians overwelmed your desire
Deadly heights reign in your love
Butterflies dance to frangrant silky romances in the night
You gracefully fly in torment of the oozing love
I'm in heaven taking the halo
Moving slow to you
I think of your love......
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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-02-22 11:01 AM

This is really good!  Leaves the reader wondering, and wanting more.
Nice work!
Danny
Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
2 posted 2000-03-01 12:30 PM

Fantastic!
IMAGERY
I love imagery
I left some of my best imagery in #5
there is some serious talent here
KEEP ON WRITING!
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