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Silent Love |
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-LeAnn- Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13San Antonio,TX |
Just Hush, No words need 2 be spoken, let me tell u w/ out words… i love u very much, i want the key 2 ur heart… i want the token, Even tho we were silent… i still felt the warmth u bring 2 me, U didn't say a word… but i knew what u meant… u love me altho silence between us seems 2 be… a consistancy, few words u say are sincere, true love from u 2 me… is it there? the fact that i ? this brings me fear, U seem so sweet, not like the other ones, any doubt… wish i could delete. but u blow me off 2 "kick it wit ur duns", I understand… its okay, i just dont know what 2 say, internet or not… i love u just as much, but i'll just back off… let u be… & stop usin' our love as a crutch, we make better friends than anything else… this is how i see it, i love talking 2 u & all, 3 words left in the dark… say them now or 4ever hold ur peace… i'm not waiting… not anymore… not one bit, i thought we were meant 2 be… but ur my infatuation… i do love u tho doll, i'm tired of being quiet… u act like ur embarassed of me, not saying whats on ur mind… askin' me 2 "chill" & jus' "let u be", i jus' dunno anymore, i know i told u THAT b4, i have delcared my new found free-dom, u told me b4… u still want some?, i'm not up 4 waiting on u… or bein' put off, i wish we could cuddle & whisper sweet things 2 each other ever so soft, but u kept me on ignore, told ur friends i was a bore, i dont think ur THE ONE, thats who i want… sorry hun, but u lost ur chance, one last glance, i'm sorry babe… i still love u, i do love u… ºahemº thats ur cue, thanks for keeping this relationship on hush mode, I LOVE U sn't no special code, it means what it is… "I LOVE U", doesn't mean i love someone else… i've only loved few…… they were U U & U, i'm sorry……… BYE……… i think its best, if we regret the rest, if only u would have confessed, then this wouldn't be so messed, All Well…… thats SILENT LOVE… 4 ya……… ºsighº |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Reading this was roller coaster ride. I enjoyed the ride! I like your word substitutions! Good 4u! Danny |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Hey you! Sup? This was a great poem and it was fun reading it. I can kinda relate to some of your verses to this poem. I love to express my feelings without words. It's great when your eyes and touch can do all the talking. It's an intimate and very romantic thing.  ) You go girl! -JennyMeshan "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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-LeAnn- Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13San Antonio,TX |
Thank You!!!! I think that when people tell me i WROTE A GOOD POEM & what not… that my poetry isn't as mis-understood as i tend to think it is. I'm a very expressive person & I don't think i read poetry like ANYONE ELSE. I add my emotions to the poem. I say it how it makes me feel. I can't read something w/out putting my own lil' "Ummmƒ" into it, sorta say. I love it when people say they enjoyed or liked my poems. & It makes me "sublimely" happy to hear that it touched someone or made them THINK. But once again, thank you for letting me know what you think/thought about it!!! peace |
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