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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-02-19 04:12 PM


A friend in pain,
Needs my help.

Gotta find the words,
It’s hard, you know.

Barely knowing him,
But I want to help.

He doesn’t know it,
But I care for him.

Hes special,
You know.

I barely even know him,
But he holds a place in my heart

I care for everyone,
But this is truly different.

Danny I hope you know,
I will always be here if you need.



 "Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description."
-Jaya Ballard, Task Mage

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Salooma
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1 posted 2000-02-19 04:36 PM


Great poem Tamma....totally reminds me of a friend I have.  

Salma

LyricFetish
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2 posted 2000-02-19 06:08 PM


I'm not sure about a title, but I think you've expressed your desire to help your friend very nicely.

 "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul

Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
3 posted 2000-02-19 06:54 PM


This is for AllenC, see poem "Lost Love"  

 "In a secret, I lIve, InvIsIble to all"
-Me :)

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