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Teen Poetry #2

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JennyeMeshan
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-02-18 06:46 PM

<div align="Center"><font face="Arial, Arial, Verdana" color="#871f78" size="2">Who is Kristi trying to set me up with?,
Someone that might make me feel light?,
What is taking so long to see him?
Someone who might be so right?,
What if he is my true destiny?,
Someone who walks with me in the night?,
Why is Keith trying to ruin this?,
Someone who always starts a fight?,
Karissa tells me he's cute,
Someone who is a nice sight,
Isaac is a mystery to me,
Someone in my mind so bright,
Could this be the day we meet?,
Someone who will love me...well...he might.

Jennye T.

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<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> If thou can wait then thou shall stay
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[This message has been edited by JennyeMeshan (edited 02-19-2000).]

JennyeMeshan
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

1 posted 2000-02-19 02:23 AM

Thanks for reading my poem! I hope you liked it!
Jennye T.

"If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-02-19 12:23 PM

I think this is well written..good use of rhyme and phrasing. It flowed well and you gave it expression.
Good work...keep writing!
Danny

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