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To My Ex-fiance'
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To My Ex-fiance' |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I'm not really angry Because I knew it would not last You drifted away a long time ago Oh well, it's all in the past You have moved on And found another one If only she knew The damage you have done Yet through all this The eternal will ring true Only my heart knows this... I still love you... "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm sorry about your ex-fiancee... "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
LoveBug: Me too....  "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin </font> [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-18-2000).] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
HE WASN'T WORTH IT!!!!!!!!! sorry had to let the anger out  |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
*ramble warning*... you know, normally when i think of engagement, i think of some mature, suave gentlemen getting on one knee and proposing a life-long commitment to the woman of his dreams... but then i remember my friend sam... the guy who was engaged 3 times before age 18 (and coincidentally broke them all off before a month had passed)... i'm sorry that you had to meet someone like that lavada... keep your chin up and your pen to the paper (the latter one is a personal request)... sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sweetheart: I like your poem a lot, it's soft and very gentle.. I wish you much happier days ahead.. HUGS |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks to all who replied..It is great to know I have a family of friends to come to if I ever need anything stay cool all  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Lavada~ I'm still sorry to hear about your ex-fiance, but remember we're all here for you. I know the rough times hurt, but you always manage to pull through. Keep writing, and remember that you'll find someone who actually deserves you. ~Kristi Lynn  |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I've been proposed to 3 times in the past 2 years, but oh well, only 1 of 'em used a ring. Andrew took the ring off my hand and said "will you marry me?" as he slipped it back on  but when he did that i was going out with another guy, but we didnt last much longer after that"In a secret, I lIve, InvIsIble to all" -Me :) |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
although i wasn't going to marry my now exboyfriend i still feel the same way. your poem is so good because it's so real. you did a really good job. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks Angel, Tamma, and Sunshine...IT's good to know I'm not alone.. stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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