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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
A(t h)L O)g i)N E)n 2-18-00 "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i'm totally dumbfounded by the complex simplicity of it all. does this actually have meaning or were you just in a weird mood? rich-pa |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
yes it does have a meaning and a message. Just have to, be creative.. "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
well could you elaborate? |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
if i must.......it's not to complex, look at the captial letters which spell ALONE then the small letters read from bottom to top spell night and the first to letters are "at" so it reads "alone at night" "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i didn't even notice that, moron me. i like it much better now |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
*heh* i was trying to figure out the significance of "ALONE thgin"... interesting piece hoppy... sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I caught the ALONE part, and I saw "At" but thought it wasn't connected. Now that I see things clearly, I'm impressed. "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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