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Teen Poetry #2

What It Took

potrygirl
Junior Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 23
Peoria, Arizona, United States

0 posted 2000-02-17 05:52 PM

I have had great responces from the last two poems I put up so I thought I'd put up another!  Thanks for the responce hope to get the same here!!

What It Took

A wink was all it took for my stomoch to get
   butterflys.
A touch was all it took for my heart to fall into
   your hands.
A look was all it took for me to become lost.
A word was all it took for you to become mine.
A lie was all it took for us to lose the laughter.
A few harsh words was all it took to seperate us
   forever.
A few attepts at ruining my life was all it took to
   send me home in tears.
A few painfull snaps was all it took to ruin your
   reputation.
A few honestys was all it took to ruin your chances
   with the next girl, and keep you from lieing to your buddies again.

-Stacye Walters-

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-02-17 09:30 PM

From the sounds of it you did right girl! He deserves what ever is served him if he lied to his buddies (I am assuming what that lie was and I think I am correct). Way to stand up for yourself.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-02-19 12:34 PM

A read was all it took for me to begin to enjoy your poetry. You have a special talent so continue posting your work for all your fans.
Danny

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