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potrygirl Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 23Peoria, Arizona, United States |
Hi everyone! This is the first peom I ever wrote. "Hunger" In the silence I hunger for your touch. In the noise I hunger for your body next to mine. In the morn I hunger for our lips to touch. In the afternoon I hunger for our meetings. In the stillness I hunger for your breath on my ear. In the rush I hunger for your time. In all time with every breath I hunger in every dream with every touch I hunger for you, to be your every dream, thought, and hunger for this is what I truly hunger. Hope you all like it tell me what you think! Please!! -Stacye Walters- [This message has been edited by potrygirl (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job for your first poem. I congratulate you and hope you have many other nice poems. Ohh.. and Welcome To Passions! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I don't know how I skipped over this when it was first posted. <sorry> I like this a lot. It's strait to the point, and the ending is really cool. Most impressive.  "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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