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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA 
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Feelings By: Trevor Skogsbergh Everyday You're in my mind I think of you All the time Shimmering eye's Beating hearts I've loved you always From the start We love each other True and true It started one day Just out of the blue You've changed a lot That long time ago And now look at all You've got to show Remember how embarrassed You always were? That's all changed Your old ways a blur Now look how open That you've become Much more cunning Much more strong I'm glad your open As open as you can be But there are times I wish you could see See me happy See me sad See me blush See me mad See me cry See me smile Yet I think All the while That I love you more Than life itself And I know you better Than an old book on the shelf There's something you should know I've told a lie It can't be seen By the naked eye It's about trust And you and me It all started You didn't see I wish you were there To see my face I could have used You're warm embrace To hold me and tell me That it's okay To heal my heart Of it's dismay I wanted to hear "Never again" But instead I heard "He's my friend" You can't expect me To get over this Not now or later Or with a kiss I know one day When we become one Then every ounce Of my trust will come It's not that I don't trust you A bit or at all I'm just tired of always Taking the fall You're at a party Wow, that's great! But who's the guy You're out with late? I know that didn't happen But what should I say? Should I leave it alone For another day? If all this Had happened to you Would you leave me alone? What would you do? If you had just told me Right from the start These bad feelings wouldn't be here Not in my heart I hope you're not mad You know I love you dearly Please don't be angry This was written sincerely I try to be The best boyfriend I can But times like this I fell like a ham I'm pouring my heart out I know this poem is lame But it's not a joke Or even a game I wish you could know I wish you could hear That losing you Is my greatest fear In my dreams I see your face Going to Another place Speaking with Another man Loving him As much as you can Me not there But at home Sitting there All alone Twiddling my thumbs Staring into space Wishing I was there To see your face I wonder if you're happy I wonder if you're sad I wonder if you love me I wonder if you're mad There are times I can't tell If you're out or you're in If you'll still be there Through thick and through thin What about times that I need A little reassurance? It doesn't take much Just a little endurance Tell me what you want And I'll do my best To abide by your wishes And forget the rest I'll tell you now And I'll tell you true You're all I ever wanted No one but you So please tell me Say you'll be mine From now until forever Till the end of time |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Trevor, this poem is anything but lame. It is incredibly heartfelt and moving. It brought a tear to my eye, and that is a very difficult thing to do. I suggest you give this to the one you wrote it about. She needs to know your feelings. Keep up the good work, I look foreward to reading more of your poetry. I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
*sniff* (wipes a tear away) great poem Trevor...*sniff* and good luck too   [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-04-2000).] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I loved your poem - your poetry is anything but lame, like mistikman said. I totally agree with him that it's heartfelt and you should give it to the one you wrote it for. It's so sweet, and it says what's in your heart. I hope to see more of your poetry soon. ~Kristi Lynn "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
This definitely was far from lame. This girl is lucky to have you feel so strongly for her, and I agree, you need to tell her. Really good job! Keep it up! ~Sarah |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This was such a sweeeeet poem!!! You should really give this to her. Any girl would fall for something as sweet as that! Good luck! Salooma |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Everything but lame. I liked the line scheme. I agree with everyone else it's very touching and you should give to that girl. I don't know one girl who wouldn't be impressed by that. Isa |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
This was not lame! Great Job! |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
Actually, I did give it to her. Five minutes later she broke up with me. This was the first and last poem I've ever written. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
wow, are you kidding or what yo? that sucks. i'm sorry yo, i hope you can learn to write again becaus eyour poem was incredibly moving and heartfelt. i'm sorry to hear that rich-pa |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
Trevor, All taht I can do is applaud your writing. I know what it feels like to pour your heart out to someone, and want them to love you. But then when you feel most vonerble, they destroy you. I loved this poem, it sounds exactly the way that I felt about the most serious realationship I ever had, coincidently he was also trevor. Once more, wonderful job. Amber ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Trevor, I want you to get yourself a HUGE ice-cream shake (or whatever your favorite treat is) and while you eat it say to yourself "I ROCK!" Wonderful poem. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
You're kidding, right? Wow, I'm sorry, Trevor. Don't give up on your poetry, though. I like it, and that should mean something. I've written poems for people, especially a guy named Todd from Oconto, and after giving him the poems I wrote, he didn't keep in touch with me anymore. It hurts, yes, but I'm always here for ya, hun!  ~Kristi Lynn  "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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cK Navarro Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 21Helsinki Finland |
wow that was an art of a broken heart! you´re pretty good at it, so don´t give it up. there are many ways to express yourself where it doesn´t always take a broken heart. this girl seems to be more than life to you. but you don´t really need to be alive to write poems, for as long as your hand moves. heh...:> just for the sake of cheering ya up. you hang in there man -C- |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This was a wonderful poem! I wish someone would write something like that for me! If this girl doesn't appreciate something like this, maybe she doesn't deserve you... but I know from personal experence that love is blind. At least you had the courage to tell this girl how you feel, unlike this coward that just stares at her true love. Anyway, you have a great talent for writing, and I hope you contenue to practise the art! Best of luck! ~LoveBug "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
If someone wrote a poem like this about me, i would have taken him into my arms and refused to let him go, until i knew everything was fine between us...Great Poem tho  "Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description." -Jaya Ballard, Task Mage |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
I'll tell you what. If all of you enjoyed this poem as much as you say you did. Then I dedicate it to you. I thank you all. Trevor |
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Nights Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56 |
This is an incredible poem. I really enjoyed it. I loved everything about it. Great job "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE |
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