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To A Friend on Valentine's Day
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To A Friend on Valentine's Day |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I gave my friend this poem along with a flower yesterday on Valentine's Day. Some of it might not be to understandable. It's stuff that we alwayz talk about I guess. What do you guys think? My Poem For You… I wonder what it is I love most about our friendship. And what means most to me. So in this poem I wrote the best things that make me love you! Maybe it’s your bright morning smile, Or the way you call me on speed dial. Maybe it’s the way you laugh at all my stupid jokes, Even when I’m being starred at by all the other folks. Or maybe it’s our deep conversations that no one understands, About Chalupas and Pizzas and other womanly demands. Perhaps it’s the funny sincerity in your words, Or the tough realization of the bees and the birds. I’m thinking it’s probably the fact you’re so sweet, But not if you have really big feet. On the other hand it’s probably the way I’m always right, Because we both know I’m really bright. But anyway since this isn’t all about me, I guess I should get to the more important stuff Homie G. I know it’s the fact you’re always there for when I need a friend, And the way you’re always loving and caring until the end. I think it’s because you have a lot of patience, And you even put up with my crazy demonstrations. So overall I love that you care. And I hope when you need me, that I’ll be there. I wrote this just for you on Valentine’s Day, So treasure it forever in every single way. Oh, yah, I almost forgot to say one last thing, I Love You of course, Ding! Ding! Ding! [This message has been edited by Ron (06-25-2011 10:18 AM).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Loved the poem Salma..You truly have a great friend..I hope ya'll stay that way! Don't ever break apart  stay cool Salma  ~~Lavada~~ |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
cool poem salma. ur a true friend  |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Thanks you guys....I didn't have much time to write it, but I guess it worked. Salma |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
That was so great! I wish a girl would have written me a poem and gave it to me with a rose. That was so very considerate of you Sallooma. Your ranking high in my niceness book today! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Thanks Jer....I wish I had time to change some things about the poem, but I wrote it the night before. I wish high on a niceness book everyday, but hey Valentine's Day will do. Salma [This message has been edited by Salooma (edited 02-19-2000).] |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
Salooma, That was so cute! I bet your friend will really treasure it, they should. They really has a great friend! Rachella |
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