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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
I lay here dreaming of you. Remembering times none of which are new. What did I do? What did I say? What was it that made him runaway? I blame myself it wasn't you. I never knew what exactly to do. People say it wasn't my fault. I've locked my heart inside a vault. Never again shall I trust. Only to feel what they call lust. The only way out of this stream. Is to close my eyes and Dream. To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Tight poem girl!! I like the concept of it!! Anyways keep uo the good work! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great poem. I know exactly what you mean. I've felt like that too many times. Keep your head up! Salma |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx guys this one was written in a time of terrible circumstances.love ya'll  To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I am definitely one who escapes my pain by dreaming. Exellent, heartfelt work, Chic. I hope things are going better for you. [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 02-15-2000).] |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Good job. The poem had alot of emotion and hurt feelings placed in it. Sad read but it was a good write! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx all this one wrote after my ex fiance' forgot we were engaged.  To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Chic, I liked your poem, and the sad feelings shown are always a bummer to overcome. I know some of what you feel, though I can't say all. I'm here if you ever need to talk. ~Kristi Lynn  |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Thanx kristi *sniffles* and say's I can't say anymore To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great poem chic, I like it a lot. I can relate it well to my current situation, where the girl I like keeps running away  |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx mistik  ur sweet and don't worry u'll find one that won't run To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
wow! what a poem. i never thought someone eles could write excatly what i was feeling at the present moment for another. |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Ahhh! How true your words ring, chic!! I too am, unfortunately, living vicariously through my dreams..... :.) Vreni |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx sunshine i felt like this often whenever my ex-fiance' proposed to another while we were engaged thanx vreni i'm always living in my dreams...for me it seems dark and depressing opposed to the real world which i feel sucluded. To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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Gadget28 Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33Miami, Florida United States |
WHAT?!? Your fiance' proposed to another while you were engaged? WHAT A LOSER!!!! I hope the best for you, I loved your poem! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Yea Gadget he proposed to another and didn't tell me the only way I found out was that the girl he proposed to asked me to be her maid of honor...even though we didn't really know each other. If anything good happens to me...forget it...it ain't gonna happen. To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
*bump* To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
bump To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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