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Only Human |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
I laugh I cry I'm only human I love I hate I'm only human I win I lose I'm only human I hurt I heal I'm only human Why can't you see, That this is me. I'm just like you... I'm only human To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I like your poem it's very powerfull even though it's very simple!! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Simply put, yet powerfully stated. I loved it! Salma |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx ya'll for the reply I just came up with it out of the blue while i was resting so that's why it's simple i reckon  To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
chic: simple yet thoughtful and intellectually provocative... i like  sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ahh.. I was just thinking about this today! I stated to my professor that I was only human and we make mistakes. Very good topic. Thanks for sharing! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
everyone who replied: thanx guys Jer: I understand that this is what i want to tell my father but am not strong enough to say. To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
*bump* To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
bump To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
Your poem is really good. And if I had enough strength I'd tell my ex the same thing but I can't. |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
i understand that feeling...but sooner or later (rather sooner) you need to tell him To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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