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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Nothing for Valentine's Day Nothing for Christmas Nothing for my birthday For me Nothing but lies And broken promises Nothing but heartache For me No more happiness Or dreams of forever No more love from you For me Not a single rose Or a single card No phone call either For me No more love No more dreams No more marriage Of my heart to yours For me... Me and my fiance' are not together anymore. He sent me an e-mail saying he couldn't handle us being apart, or a long engagement, which was his idea. So..broken-hearted and all alone, I write this poem, and nurse my wounded heart...on Valentine's Day  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Great poem girl!!! I like the format of the poem!! But man after reading that poem I couldn't help to think it sucks to be you on this valentines day!! Baby girl you gots to keep your head up! "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks Dean..I feel better  stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I must have read the other one first I guess, but this is a great poem. I'm sure it's hard and everything, especially on Valentine's Day, but keep smiling and hopefully something'll work out for you. Salma |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks Salma..I don't think he really ever loved me anyway..it's better like this..especially since he already has another girlfriend  stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
scg: if this poem is true to life, then i dont think this guy ever had the right to propose to you... even more so if what you say now is also true (that he has a new girlfriend already)... hope you can bounce back (i'm sure you can)... email me if you need to talk ([email protected])... sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks Jerome...I might take you up on that offer It's great to know there are people who care it makes me want to cry But I won't...I'm a big girl... stay cool ya'll ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Lavada~ I loved your poem, and I can't believe he did that to you... I'm here for ya, if you need to talk. My e-mail is [email protected].... It's okay to cry, it shows emotion and strength that you're not afraid of what others think... I'm always here for ya, I promise.  ~Kristi Lynn  |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Arr... let me at'em! I'll tear'em up! How cruel and mean. V-day has been nothing but a bummer for alot of people. I sure hope the un-lovedboat doesn't sink because it's overloaded! I send you my sincere condolences and a big HUG! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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poetic_butterfly Junior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 25illinois, usa |
nice job. the repetition really works here. ....the words that stand still are often the ones that move us most.... |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Angel: Thanks! Jer: AW..how sweet! Poetic_butterfly: I thought it would sound better if I used the repitition in this poem..more deep..you know? stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Lavada, This was a really great poem as well. After readnig your little explanation at the bottom..it seems sad that we're in an age, where something so personal, as breaking up with someone you thought you were going to spend the rest of your life, is done through an email. It's amazing that we've come to that. Keep your head up. ~Sarah |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks Sarah...I have been keeping my head up ever since it happened... stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
Wow..Hey its ok...soon ull get over it and these things happen don be sad! faith but the poem was good! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks faith..I've been over it since he found himself another girl stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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