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Teen Poetry #2

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Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-02-15 12:43 PM

They throw you
You catch'em
They fall
You pick'em

They'll listen
You talk
They tell
You cry

What happened?
They threw you
What happened?
You caught'em

You're playing this game again
Trying to be careful
Uh,oh the game starts to begian
You gotta be dareful

You caught'em
They throw you
You drop'em
You're careful.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-02-19 01:17 PM

This was interesting. Couldn't get a meaning but maybe it wasn't necessary.
Nice use of recurring phrases.
Danny

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

2 posted 2000-02-19 04:47 PM

That's something to think about. I didn't really understand it, can you explain it?

Salma

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

3 posted 2000-02-20 12:01 PM

It is about picking your friends. Sometimes you get friends that turn their back on you and you let them,at the end of the poem it shows that you are careful about picking your friends so you drop the ones that turn their back on you.

-LeAnn-
Junior Member

since 2000-02-19

Posts 13
San Antonio,TX

4 posted 2000-02-20 01:23 AM

talk about hidden meaning……
takes a true poet 2 get THAT ºahemº "hidden"…… & stuff………

GOOD JOB¡!¡
U made me think……
i like that in a poem……
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Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

5 posted 2000-02-20 10:06 AM

Wow....now after rereading it....I can actually understand it. That's really good. Thanks for the explaination.

Salma

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