Teen Poetry #2 |
My Valentines Day |
LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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So, it’s Valentine’s day again And here I am, alone Maybe it’s not meant to be Maybe I was destined to be alone Living in a dream world That will never come true I see my friends Getting flowers, candy, and kisses They are kind to me But it’s not the same It just isn’t the same If only I could have him hold me And have his eyes look into mine I would give anything for that But it’s just not meant to be I’m destined to be alone If I must be alone I wish I could stop dreaming Dreaming an impossible dream Can’t my mind rest? Can’t I stop the torture? No, no one can stop the torture No one but him... And that will never be So, I will always be alone for Valentine’s day And every other day of the year I’d better get used to it... easier said than done "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
I completely understand. Thank you for writing this. I needed to know that someone else is where I am, but today was actually good for me because I was a secret admirer |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh Love Bug, you'll find him. From what I can see, you're a sweet and loving person. What guy in his right mind could resist that? (there are many guys not in their right mind, yes I know, but some are!). Great work, and keep up the hope! You'll have your valentine someday, I'm sure of it! *Krista Knutson* One lives in the hope of becoming a memory. ~*Antonio Porchia*~ |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
ahhhh... Erica! You can be my Valentine. I don't have one yet! I'm in the same boat you are in. Just be thankful not everyone is. (That boat would sink if it was true.)<!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler </font> [This message has been edited by Jer (edited 02-15-2000).] |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Well...I will join you all in that boat. It's nice to know that others know just how I feel. Really great poem once again Lovebug! ~Sarah |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Thanks for the nice comments, everyone! They made my day! "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world" |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
you know, I have a boyfriend, and he didnt give me those things, he treats it like any other day, I find myself thinking I'd rather tell people I have no one then to tell them my guy won't even emphasize one time what I mean to him. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
lovebug: a well-written depiction of Single-Person's Awareness Day... i like it quite a bit and i hope you find your prince sincerely, jerome the melancholy priest Disarm you with a smile And leave you like they left me here To wither in denial The bitterness of one who's left alone --[billy corgan]-- |
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