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Look closely and youll see the title |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Come here, boy, i need you. Rarely showing my love, hiding in the shadows Understanding that i must, tell you what i hold for you. Sharing a secret, no one understands. Here, now i must, say "i love you" -written for andrew 000214 [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Tamma... you are the first one who has used this method to get people to read your work. I aplaud you because it is the title that gets you your reader. Plus you did it without saying "Please read me" "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
In order to catch the title, you have to take the capitalized letters...there are 5...  :รพ "Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description." -Jaya Ballard, Task Mage |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Very cute. I thought it was funny and original and sweet. Stay cool! "The bullets you bite from the pain you request, you're finding harder to digest" -Collective Soul |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I've done this kind of writing on here before...I love this type too.. it's easy to come up with words that fit the beginning letters..like yours "CRUSH" or mine "SHADOWS" anyway, great poem Tamma stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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