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S3NSATION18
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0 posted 2000-02-14 12:13 PM


I care for you with all my heart
i dont know just where to start

i've held it in for quite some time
who's to know if you'll ever be mine

i want you but do you want me
just for you i want to be

ive chosen you above all
to be the man that i can call...

it felt so good to finally say
i want you here everyday

i know lately you've had things to do
i just can't help how i feel for you






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Jer
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1 posted 2000-02-14 07:07 PM


Such a great poem. I'm glad I'm first to respond because now everyone has to eat my words when I say...  "Wow.. you have been reading my mind!" Anyway, try sending this to that "special someone" and see what to responce is. You'll never know if you don't try!

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

S3NSATION18
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since 2000-01-26
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2 posted 2000-02-14 07:11 PM


thanx for the support...i am going to tell this person how i feel... we been dating for a month already but i want him to be my boyfriend...so hopefully this will work
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