True love-A Valentine's gift for all of u!:)

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Teen Poetry #2

True love-A Valentine's gift for all of u!:)

faith
Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 89

0 posted 2000-02-13 03:30 AM

Finding true love is what everyone yearns,
Rare is the trust and the faith that one earns,
Sweet are the joys and the laughter they share,
Heaven is to know that someone out there cares,
Long lived and soothing  are  the memories they beholds ,
Nice is the feeling to have someone to hold ,
Secret are the smiles and the looks they weave,
Happy are the dreams and the fantasies they seek,
Everything to him is the love that he wants,
To be with him is all that she  longs,
It's a treasure which is oh-so-near, yet so  hard to find,
The key to which is when two hearts bind.

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2000-02-13 11:14 AM

very well said faith ... true love is worth waiting for ... and you'll have no problem spotting it when it happens along ... don't be fooled by plastic wrap ... 'zip lock'
seals love in like no other ... even guards against freezer burn

Rex}<{{{{o>

I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

2 posted 2000-02-13 12:04 PM

Thanks faith...and what a beautiful way of putting it. That's one of the loveliest poems I've read.

Salooma

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-02-13 05:41 PM

You are a wonderful writer. If only true love was as easy for me to find as it is for you to describe.....but your beautiful words still touched me.

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

4 posted 2000-02-14 06:43 PM

Ahhhh... Love is in the air. All I have to do is log into this forum and see all the love written in words. You did an especaly great job on writing this. The word choice everything was great. Good Job!

"WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

Penelope
Junior Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 31

5 posted 2000-02-14 08:16 PM

I loved this poem, very beautifully written. I look forward to reading more of your work.

-Penny

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