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Enigmatic New Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 5 |
I feel it but i won't let it near i can't describe what i see but i know that it's not real i dance around the truth, knowing the pain it will inflict. in my mind i see visions but i know none of it's real, i'd tell you what i feel but you can't understand your not where i am alone in a confused land i wish you could understand my thoughts but i can't let them go so i keep my heart hidden and my mind closed, once i let my heart wonder now i know not to let it go 12-17-99 Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
I've felt like this before; I feel like that now, in fact. Letting yourself love and feel just because you've been hurt, no matter how badly, is more of a pain than a mend to you inside. You become more hopeless when you aren't really all that helpless at all. But otherwise, lovely poem. Welcome to Passions. ~Astraea who also knows that she probably should be taking a sabbatical, emotionally and physically, but misses Passions too much  "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You'd be surprised at how many people that have been where you're at don't make the mistake of bottling it up find a good friend to confide in they can't give you a cure but they gan give you a solid shoulder to lean on You're not alone ... look around ... read some poems ... you'll find your lonely world is heavily populated Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Enigmatic New Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 5 |
yes i know how many "lonely" people there are. that's what the poems about. I like to write what i see in others, "is not only he who speaks contrary to what he knows who lies, but even more he who speaks contrary to what he does not know. And thus you speak of yourselves in your dealings with others and deceive your neighbour with yourselves." |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
this was absolutely beautiful... i think the makers of idioms and such need to make one for this.. like unrequited love.. but this is more of a scared love... hm... Regret for things you did maybe tempered by time, regret for things you Didn't do, however, is inconsolable... -------823------- |
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Enigmatic New Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 5 |
Star Fairy 2: scared love? what do you mean? "is not only he who speaks contrary to what he knows who lies, but even more he who speaks contrary to what he does not know. And thus you speak of yourselves in your dealings with others and deceive your neighbour with yourselves." |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
enigmatic: this is an extremely nihlistic piece, but being a former nihlist i understand the sentiment well.. the poem is well-concieved and honest, as well as well-written... i do have to part ways with you on some of your ideas though... i certainly understand what it's like to put walls around oneself... sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
Sweet poem---the feeling is one i hat, and i think everyojne hates it, but i know that it is with us..keep up to good work.. -Ender |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great poetry....I've felt that many times before, but you've discribed it so well! Salooma |
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