|Teen Poetry #2
since 2000-02-10Posts 39
We always admired him.
Secretly I liked him.
He knew...and chose you.
You were excited.
Thought I'd understand.
I thought I did too.
My heart broke.
I couldn't tell you.
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since 2000-02-06Posts 233
Oh, if only I could count just how many times this has happened between my best friend and myself, with her being the one always picked.....excellent job, though--I really liked it!
since 2000-01-13Posts 528
I've experienced a similar episode with a friend, only the guy chose me. It led to so many problems that i gave him up. But now we both date eachother's "castoffs" so often that we don't get hurt about it. But I can see where you're coming from.
since 1999-12-08Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA
Very beautiful.......i know what it is like...i have had friends do that to me too many times.....keep your chin up...you r too good for him.....cant wait for the next poem.....keep up the good work
since 1999-12-04Posts 549
rachella: simplistic but honest... i think you did a pretty good job here, and it's certainly a sentiment that many understand
jerome the mysterious priest
A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
since 2000-02-10Posts 4
I so know what your talking about....this happend to me and a friend of mine this last summer. It hurts! Sorry for you loss.
since 1999-12-02Posts 443
Welcome to Passions! This was a great first post.
"WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler
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