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rachella
Junior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 39
Indiana

0 posted 2000-02-10 10:06 PM

               Broken

     We always admired him.
     Secretly I liked him.
     He knew...and chose you.
     You were excited.
     Thought I'd understand.
     I thought I did too.
     My heart broke.
     I couldn't tell you.

bobbycat
Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 233
USA

1 posted 2000-02-10 10:36 PM

Oh, if only I could count just how many times this has happened between my best friend and myself, with her being the one always picked.....excellent job, though--I really liked it!

Bobbycat =^..^=

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-02-11 12:02 PM

I've experienced a similar episode with a friend, only the guy chose me. It led to so many problems that i gave him up. But now we both date eachother's "castoffs" so often that we don't get hurt about it. But I can see where you're coming from.

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

3 posted 2000-02-11 02:11 PM

Very beautiful.......i know what it is like...i have had friends do that to me too many times.....keep your chin up...you r too good for him.....cant wait for the next poem.....keep up the good work
-Ender

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

4 posted 2000-02-11 05:11 PM

rachella: simplistic but honest... i think you did a pretty good job here, and it's certainly a sentiment that many understand

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

melmel02
New Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 4

5 posted 2000-02-11 07:04 PM

I so know what your talking about....this happend to me and a friend of mine this last summer. It hurts! Sorry for you loss.

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

6 posted 2000-02-11 07:17 PM

Welcome to Passions! This was a great first post.

"WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

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