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Teen Poetry #2

discerning angels

darksideofthesun
Junior Member

since 1999-10-21

Posts 12

0 posted 1999-10-21 08:48 PM

I once met an angel named
deception
who whispered broken promises in my ears to make me believe in her lies
I once met an angel named
vanity
who lurked with a vengance behind the faces she consumed to take away all feeling of something real
I once met an angel named
ignorance
not able to understand things so simple
who couldnt differentiate the dying from the living- maybe just because she didnt want to see the truth
I once found the devil with an angel's face
an angel who came to me in silent dreams
saw my transparent secrets
taunted my weaknessgazed at me with those blue eyes
drinking my salty tears like the blood of love's martyrs
which now mingles with my own.
I once met a devil with an angel's face
but i couldnt tell the difference any more.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-21 10:10 PM

Very interesting poem, I must say. I liked it.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

kari
Member

since 1999-10-03

Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

2 posted 1999-10-21 10:51 PM

I liked that a lot!!! Keep it up! Very creative!

angel1004
New Member

since 1999-10-24

Posts 8
madison,tn usa

3 posted 1999-10-26 06:10 PM

wow that was deep. i really liked that
and felt it. keep it up. maybe you could
be my mentor^^

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