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Can i tell you something...?
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Nights Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56 |
Tell the world how you feel And they'll laugh in your face Mad men, psychos, depressants Have all been in your place "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Maybe, but you still need to let out how you feel every once in a while. I like your poem, but it sorta makes me feel like everyone thinks my feelings aren't important, even if they are. Keep up the good work... ~Kristi Lynn  "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
nice work night!! you can tell anyone how you feel, but noone really cares, they just shake their head and give you slant glances and condime you to the dark side of their mind. i like NEW POETRY FORUM NOW OPEN "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. NEW POETRY FORUM ADDED Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. THE PAGE OF PURE POETIC EXPRESSION!! |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i can see what ya mean yo, and good little poem rich-pa |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
nights: another beautiful piece... i've felt this way often *heh*... though i think i'm working my way up to being one of the madmen nowadays... my roomate is training me...  but *shhh* you didn't hear that from me. . . . .sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job. Short, effective, and to the point! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
Short and to the point---I LIKE IT----keep up the great work---i cant wait for your next one. -Ender |
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