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Teen Poetry #2

Maitay Please Read...dedicated to All of The Members Here

S3NSATION18
Junior Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 31

0 posted 2000-02-10 11:40 AM

THRU MY EYES

At first it was hard i must admit
you never know what you'll get
when you make certain choices in your life
they could cut your heart
like a knife...

but wounds in time soon will heal
you just have to wait and try to deal
it hasn't been that long
but i've learned to grow with my choices
and not let it tear me apart
and listen to the voices
the ones that speak from my heart...

no matter what only you can heal your wounds
but other people will be here to help you through
and to you my friends i want to give thanks...to passions in poetry for soothing my aches...i dedicate my strength to all you guys...for helping me with my problems and seeing them thru my eyes.

if you would like to talk to me outside of the forum i can be reached at s3nsation18@aol.com

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-02-10 11:47 AM

This is really sweet s3nsation. I think we all feel this way to a certain degree. I love this forum, being able to put my ideas down and see what people think. But anyway, i really appreciate your flattery

and it was well said.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

2 posted 2000-02-10 11:48 AM

great poem s3nsation! Thanks also...

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

3 posted 2000-02-10 04:18 PM

s3nsation, your poem was soooooo sweet! I loved it, and I completely agree with you. I love being a member here at Passions, and once I started posting my poetry and stuff, I realized that a lot of people care, even if we haven't met in person.
~Kristi Lynn

P.S.- if you want to e-mail me my address is angel6982_2000@yahoo.com (Yeah, I know it's long, but my sister's boyfriend made it up for me...)

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

4 posted 2000-02-10 08:11 PM

sensation: this is a touching and very well-written poem

i like lines 9 - 12 best i'd say... flows smoothly

thank you for the tribute and know that we'll be here for you tomorrow, the day after, and evermore...

sincerely,
jerome the mysterious priest

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

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