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Maitay Please Read...dedicated to All of The Members Here |
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S3NSATION18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
THRU MY EYES At first it was hard i must admit you never know what you'll get when you make certain choices in your life they could cut your heart like a knife... but wounds in time soon will heal you just have to wait and try to deal it hasn't been that long but i've learned to grow with my choices and not let it tear me apart and listen to the voices the ones that speak from my heart... no matter what only you can heal your wounds but other people will be here to help you through and to you my friends i want to give thanks...to passions in poetry for soothing my aches...i dedicate my strength to all you guys...for helping me with my problems and seeing them thru my eyes. if you would like to talk to me outside of the forum i can be reached at s3nsation18@aol.com |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
This is really sweet s3nsation. I think we all feel this way to a certain degree. I love this forum, being able to put my ideas down and see what people think. But anyway, i really appreciate your flattery  and it was well said. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
great poem s3nsation! Thanks also... stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
s3nsation, your poem was soooooo sweet! I loved it, and I completely agree with you. I love being a member here at Passions, and once I started posting my poetry and stuff, I realized that a lot of people care, even if we haven't met in person. ~Kristi Lynn P.S.- if you want to e-mail me my address is angel6982_2000@yahoo.com (Yeah, I know it's long, but my sister's boyfriend made it up for me...) |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
sensation: this is a touching and very well-written poem i like lines 9 - 12 best i'd say... flows smoothly  thank you for the tribute and know that we'll be here for you tomorrow, the day after, and evermore...sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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