Teen Poetry #2 |
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Lullaby |
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Nights Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 56 |
A lie was told to the world that I so much adored It backed them away and laid their hearts in dismay I'm in shame, for I know that this is no game But it makes me so insane, always the one to maim Set with the best, never made to rest It was just another test, in which I lost all zest Taken out of the storm, in which I was born I was never so torn, and now I lay here and mourn Why I’m prying this open, what I’m trying to say Is I told a lie, I don't know why, and now I cry For this is a pain that I gained by telling a lullaby The rules I did bend, and now I wish for a happy end "It's my heart that pounds beneath my flesh it's my mouth that pushes out this breath..."-FTE |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
This was very well written, and very interesting. I liked it alot. Keep up the great work! : (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
very cleverly written...good job..thanks for the read... and we all make mistakes.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
reminds me of a rap song with all the internal rhyming and stuff. nonetheless, it was a very good poem. |
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