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Teen Poetry #2

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NaTaLy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 1999-10-21 10:20 AM

i wake up on morning to find myself lying in a bed of wildflowers in a meadow all my own.
i laugh as little drops of dew roll down the tip of my nose as they tricke from the weeping willows above.
i look down, only to find myself carressed in a magical gown made of the sparkling meterial that can only be made from the stars in heaven.
i walk amongst my paraise wonderland taking in every sight carefully and hungrily.
all of a sudden,a milk wite steed gallops toward me.
its reigns are made of gems and rubies and its mane is soft to the touch.
it whisks me on its back and we ride into the sun.
and then i open my eyes and find myself disappointingly in my own little cozy house,in my own little cozy bed.

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n.m.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-21 05:13 PM

This poem is really beautiful...I absolutely LOVE the imagery.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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