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Starry Night |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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Sleep descends upon the city The gloom of the night Only to be dimly lighten by the moon The streets are bare The homes with no eyes Nothing moves Except the leaves with the wind Which howls a warning To not venture outside In this dark, gloomy night You sleep in comfort knowing The one you love is there Next to you There to protect you Keep you safe From any harm that may come [This message has been edited by Ender (edited 02-06-2000).] |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
ender: this a beautiful description... i like the line "the homes with no eyes"... makes me think of the houses with their lighted windows as eyes... i'm not sure that's what you meant it to be, but it works here  sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
A painted picture with your words...Good imagery here  There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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