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Its Been A While
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
It's been a while now Maybe you've forgotten how To love someone so very true And be completly devoted to I'll hold your heart inside my hand I will try and understand How badly you've been hurt before And that it can happen no more So reach out your heart to me Open your eyes and try to see Though it's been a while now I believe I can show you how. [This message has been edited by Smore (edited 02-06-2000).] |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
I'm surprised this hasn't gotten at least some replies for the simple beauty of it. It's a lovely poem. Nice work. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Very nice poem. It just flows beautifully. Keep up the good work  Salma |
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