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Smore
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-02-05 11:11 PM



I miss sweet whispers in my ears
I miss you there to wipe my tears

I miss you holding me when I'm sad
Or cheering me up when I feel bad

I miss sweet things you'd always do
But most of all I just miss being with you




 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

© Copyright 2000 Smore - All Rights Reserved
poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
1 posted 2000-02-05 11:20 PM


smore: simple, sweet, and too the point... very good work  

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
2 posted 2000-02-06 02:21 AM


very nice.. a great deal of sadness even in such a short poem.  I like it
April

 ...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant,
And there it goes, I think I found my best friend...


Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

3 posted 2000-02-06 08:05 AM


Great poem....it's short, sweet, and simple.

Salma

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