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ryun
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa

0 posted 2000-02-02 11:46 PM


I write to learn my thoughts..
I think to understand a plot
Do we see?
What others may see?
Or do we try, and fail with pride.
Locking out, shuting down.
Never cry..
With a straight face
I glide right by
From side to side
It's what we call
male pride..?

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Astraea
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
1 posted 2000-02-02 11:50 PM


Me like.  Nice poem, of course.  To the point, too, which is something I rather enjoy.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-02-03 09:44 AM


I like this poem, too.  In the message I recieved from your poem, I see that it's good for people to have some pride, but not to overdo it.  Keep posting your poems, and I'll keep reading them.

 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
3 posted 2000-02-03 06:56 PM


Ahhh... Carpe Diem!  I too had the same imprestion as angel6917.  Good job.
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