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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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I'm sorry |
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Minnie Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 14 |
I'm sorry I'm sorry I hurt you I'm sorry for what I said I'm sorry, I can't do what you want I'm sorry I'm me I'm sorry, there's nothing more I can do I'm sorry, I did this to you I'm sorry, I still love you I'm sorry I still cry for you I'm sorry for everything I'm sorry for me I'm sorry I couldn't do better I'm sorry I'm writting this I'm sorry, can you forgive me? I'm sorry, I Love You I'm sorry, I hung up on you I'm sorry, I didn't tell you I'm sorry I'm sorry, I didn't tell you I Love You I'm sorry I didn't try harder I'm sorry I didn't leave you alone I'm sorry I left you alone I'm sorry I can't think of the right words to say I'm sorry we couldn't make things better I'm sorry and I still love you Nothing could ever change that Please don't stop loving me I'm sorry Say that you will take me back one more time I will love you forever As we always dreamed we would be. |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
Wow again, This poem is sad indeed. Have you tried talking to him and telling him what you have written in this poem? Sometimes the smallest things can help..... good poem though! nicely written! |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Good job. The emotions and apology is very present. |
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