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KiKi
Junior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 15

0 posted 2000-02-01 07:19 PM

If only I could tell you-
Tell you my true feelings
The feelings I feel-
Feel deep down inside

I feel that I love you
That I only want to be with you-
You and no one else
But that's too hard for me

I don't want to be just friends
It is hard for me to see-
To see you with other girls
especially when it is not me...

I wish I was saying this to you
But I just couldn't do it
It would make our friendship weird
After all we are best friends

Just one more thing to say
To make me get more courage
I just only with a mirror-
a mirror had ears

*if you love someone let them go, if they return their love was yours, if they don't their love wa never yours to begin with*

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2000-02-01 11:01 PM

Very emotional and very well done. I'm impressed. Someday, you will find the courage to say what you wish to say.

*Krista Knutson*

One lives in the hope of becoming a memory.
~*Antonio Porchia*~

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 2000-02-01 11:08 PM

You have just described my feeling right now for a girl to the T! Great job. The emotions are very predominant!

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-02-02 12:35 PM

I've been toying with a poem to express exactly what this one says. Very good writing, and I can relate to the situation. Best of luck on conveying your feelings.

Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

4 posted 2000-02-02 02:31 PM

Wow! Were you reading my mind? This was beautifully written. I know how it feels to be in love with your best friend. And I know how hard it is to see them with other people. But it is possible that maybe they feel the same about you(unfortunately not the case with me, but...), you'll never know until you ask. If you ever want advice...please feel free to email me!!

Until then...keep up the good work!!
~Sarah

KiKi
Junior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 15

5 posted 2000-02-03 05:17 PM

Thanks guys!!! I did what you said about telling him and guess what!!! He feels the same towards me!! He was just too scared to tell me because he wasn't sure what I would say!!!!

*if you love someone let them go, if they return their love was yours, if they don't their love wa never yours to begin with*

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

6 posted 2000-02-03 10:05 PM

i'm really glad that worked out for you. Great poem by the way1

Salma

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