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Teen Poetry #2

So Much Thought

kari
Member

since 1999-10-03

Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

0 posted 1999-10-19 06:34 PM

Once again for you- I plea.
Your love is in words for thats all it can be.
I imagine your face, your eyes, and your smile.
I haven't kissed you in such a long while.
Your outline haunts me around our playground.
I want to scream on your absence but from my mouth comes no sound.
I can smell you as if you were right beside me.
You repeat me through your head; imagine you see.
I continuously question if this love can last.
Is it enough just to ponder the past?
Tears are a waste of time- I think.
They always come, though, like drops in a sink.
Do I really know you?
Or do I only think I do?
I can write and write of how I feel.
But its my heart that only you can heal.
Trust me when I say I love you.
Show me that you, yourself are true.
Love me, for thats all that I ask.
Take this loving prolonged task.

Silent Silver
Junior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 12
AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-10-19 08:10 PM

very deep. i enjoy it because you are really expressing what you want in the relationship. you show your deep love for the other, and that your other is all you think about, and all you ask is for them to love you back. so beautiful.

-SS

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-19 08:25 PM

Very touching, kari.

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