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I Just Don't know... |
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ryun Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33elsinore, ca, usa |
Open up Break though The fear, the lonelyness, discomfort of shyness I here Learn from everything you Miss to you it's not right to say or act.. Explain. Adore. My emotions go so far My feelings my thoughts so deep... Until frustratin creeps Discomfor it hurts To love some one but can't tell them, hurts I know this to be right Never done nothing Just wonderign and dreaming of that day careless, expressive in every good way.. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
i loved your poem Ryun...just a few misspelled words, but great just the same! Good work! keep it up!  "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I just have a couple of comments. The first being your posting numbers. You have seven posts and they are all originating posts. What that means is, you have posted seven of your own poems and have not replied to any. This is an interactive board which means we post and respond. You will find many more people replying to your work if you reply to theirs. You will also find more people replying to your works if you don't post them all at once. Post one or two today and one or two tomorrow. We only have so much time to read and reply and if we see several poems posted by the same author all at once. We tend to choose one to read and reply to and ignore the rest. It is only fair to the rest of the authors on the board. I hope you understand and will comply with these suggestions. |
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