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S3NSATION18 Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
GUESS WHAT? I DID IT... I FOUND HIM... THE GUY WHO SHOWS ME APPRECIATION. HE'S CUTE HE'S FUNNY HE'S JUST LIKE ME. HE SHOWS ME HE CARES HE MAKES ME FEEL FREE WHEN IM WITH HIM NO ONE ELSE EXISTS OH MY GOD AM I DREAMING JUST ONE MORE KISS... BEFORE I WAKE UP AND LOSE THIS BLISS. WHAT IS THIS? THAT FEELING OF BLISS HAS NOT DISAPPEARED I GUESS ITS ANOTHER IDICATION THAT I REALLY HAVE A GUY TO SHOW ME APPRECIATION |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
loved the poem S3NSATION18! One thing though..i think you meant to put INDICATION..you left out the "N"..5th stanza, 4th line. That's all i see wrong with it, and it's a minor error...great poem nonetheless  |
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