Teen Poetry #2 |
Promises |
sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I cannot promise you That I will not change I cannot promise you That I will not be hurt I cannot promise you That I will not shout I cannot promise you That I will not run away I cannot promise you my faults will not show But- I can promise you I will always be there I can promis you I will share my feelings I can promise you You will not be tied down I can promise you I will be honest I can promise you I will help you through tough times But- Most of all I promise you I will always love you Me and my b/f got back together. This is sort of a celebration poem. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I liked this one a lot. Congrats on you and your man getting back together. Hope it all works out for the best! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
yeeeeeeeeeeee haaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww!!!!!! way to go sis and i would also like to say congrats on gettin back together with the dude. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks for replying you two! it means alot! "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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ryun Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33elsinore, ca, usa |
sweet poem, congradulations on getting back together with your man!! |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
scg: i really like the "but" lines... not sure why, but i feel that they really add to the poem... perhaps it's because they give a break from the flow of the poem.. *shrugs* either way, i like it... and congratulations and many happy tidings... sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Ahh yes... congratulations! I guess this means were gonna see a lot of happy in love poetry now right? I am glad everything worked out in the end for you. Good job. |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks Jer....i'll try to come up with something happy..if the thoughts will come to me.. "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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Dusk Treader
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Nice poem! And congrats on getting back together with your man! Glad it all worked out for ya In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks dusk! I really appreciate it! Thanks all of you! ~~Lavada~~ "Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate" |
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