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How can I feel loved?
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How can I feel loved? |
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Voyce Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 13Colorado |
How can I feel loved If the love is not there How can I feel like I belong If I am not allowed to belong to I feel singled out Less than all the rest All alone In this vast world Nobody there to love Or to be loved By me Nobody gives me a chance To show them who I am What I am like Nobody wants to understand Where I come from What I say They all jump to conclusions Never giving me a chance Always shutting me out Not letting me in Cause I am who I am *note*--in order to see my picture, click back once, and when the last page comes up, click forward. for some reason, it doens tshow it the first time for me. thats just in case you wanna see what i look like. [This message has been edited by Voyce (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Penelope Junior Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 31 |
Voyce, It's horrible to feel unloved. I hope that you don't feel this way and that this is just a poem to demonstrate feelings that you've felt before. If you really do feel this way I hope you can realize that there's lots of us out here who'd love to give you a chance.  This is a good poem... I can feel the pain through your words. Keep writing.-Penny My advice in life is; talk to yourself, you never know what you'll learn. |
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