10 things I love about you

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Teen Poetry #2

10 things I love about you

eve_angel
Junior Member

since 2000-01-22

Posts 23
Australia

0 posted 2000-01-29 07:32 PM

I love the way you smile at me
Whenever we both meet
I love the way you say you love me
So warming yet so sweet
I love the way you hold me
In your ever loving arms
I love your faith and truthfulness
And I love your princy charms
I love your twinkling sparkling eyes
Like stars up in the skies
I love your vioce so soft and gental
A sound that never dies
I love your touch reaching out for me
When we're near and when we're far
I love the things you do for me
I love the way you are.

Thats ten things right?

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

1 posted 2000-01-29 07:38 PM

In a nutshell, that's a great poem.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

Mistikman
Senior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

2 posted 2000-01-29 08:07 PM

Very beautiful poem, it must be wonderful to have a person like that in your life.

I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

3 posted 2000-01-30 01:55 AM

Great poem! I love it! Keep up the good work.

Salooma

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-01-30 10:04 AM

Nice poem you got there. Really sweet. A good ten things. Keep writing and

Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member

since 2000-01-19

Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~

5 posted 2000-01-30 02:18 PM

Very sincere. Keep it up!
:

(:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

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