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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
the first time that i can ever remember being truly happy was lying in your arms last night able to love freely and without hesitation i know you can understand the beauty of your smile the softness of your lips as i kiss you goodnight the light and dark of your eyes when they shine down upon me the love i feel when you hold me secure, safe, everlasting the words that come to mind when i think in my bed at night and the light is gone but it isn't, the light is forever within us, just you and me i've realized since you've shown up that life isn't all sadness and shadows but happiness and stars and all those cliches in turn and as i lay my head down tonight i thank god and fate and heaven and hell or whatever brought you to me because you've shown me how wonderful feelings can be and this sense of security guides me on my way to sleep.... |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I hope you shared this with the person you are refering to.This is very sweet. Maybe throw some breaks into it, it might make it a little easier on the eyes. [This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This poem is really uplifting! Hope you have that feeling all your life. Nice work! |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
rhiannon: the first time i can remember being truly happy was one night when i was sick and laying on the floor in the living room of our old alabama one-story house and watching some sci-fi movie with my dad... i'll never forget that night... the movie wasn't that great... but i felt so close to him right then  just thought i'd share...sincerely, jerome the mysterious priest And their bleating was like a wet salmon slapped upon the land---slap! slap! slap! |
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