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Follow me into forever............
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jennysbeau1 Junior Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 10Cornelius, Oregon, USA |
Hello, this is a poem to my angel, my fiance who lives a thousand miles away....a little background: we met over a year ago in a chat room on aol, we conversed for 4 months before we met....during those months we fell in love with who we were on the inside,we finally met Christmas day 1998...the title comes from the last line of my marriage proposal to her...."My angel, will you follow me into forever and marry me?" This is a true story......... For Jennifer Follow me into forever....... Throughout my years of wondering, enduring my endless grief Will I find my angel? I was strong in this belief. On a lonely night not long ago, your soul that was forsaken traveled across the distance and my love was then awakened. My heart began to yearn for you, your soul was just like mine Could you be the angel thats been elsewhere all this time? I knew I had to meet you to believe our love was true, come to me my angel, is it really really you? When we shared that perfect kiss that glorius Christmas day, my heart cryed out "My Angel" and I knew our love would stay. The lonely man that I once was is no more it seems, For I have found my angel The semblance of my dreams. So, I take you to be my bride one love they cannot sever, Take my hand my angel and follow me into forever. Love, Terry ------------------ Remember...write what you love..and love what you write...Terry [This message has been edited by jennysbeau1 (edited 10-21-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
A lovely read - and welcome to the home of poets! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wonderful poem  welcome!------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
lovely poem.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How sweet..welcome to passions |
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jennysbeau1 Junior Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 10Cornelius, Oregon, USA |
Thank you all for the welcome...... I appreciate your sentiments and your critiques......thank you |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This poem really speaks to me, as I know exactly what you are talking about. : ) I like the way you translated this. : ) Thanks. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A Beautiful poem,lovely, she is a blessed angel to have a poem so deep written to her, and to have had such a romantic proposal! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This poem smiles. Much happiness to both of you! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Very good read and very loving! Liked much. Jennifer D. [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-22-1999).] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is very heartwarming!! Really enjoyed it! And welcome to Passions ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Terry. I think you and Jenny are very very lucky to have found each other. What a beautiful sentiment...follow me into forever......Love it! And welcome to Passions! ------------------ Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, Terry, This is wonderful. believe me when I say many, many people here will appreciate this piece...and I for one, having my love 2,000 miles away from me right now. I hope to have a similar ending as you've shown us here. Beautiful poem. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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debbiek New Member
since 2001-09-18
Posts 1 |
Terry, Your words said all I have wanted to say to my soul mate that I met 11 months ago on the internet. We have met, after the first kiss we knew that it was forever. He is 14,000 mile away but in my heart forever. We will be together soon forever and I sent him a copy of your words knowing full well that they will touch his heart as they have touched mine. Thank you. DPK and Boat |
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