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Home Cookin' Out West (reply to Roxane's challenge)
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Home Cookin' Out West (reply to Roxane's challenge) |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Ok, fair warning, this is a cruddy poem, and er well, whatever, I wrote it in 15 minutes so nyyyyaaaa LoL.... I was sittin' by the pool, just asoakin' my feet, when the dinner bell rang...'twer time to eat. So I picked up a towel...dried off my feet, and from the pool, beat a swift retreat. For this down-home cookin', is simply great, you ain't seen nothin', unless you've ate, my mom's home cookin', off a paper plate. Yup, where I live, away out west, down-home cookin', is simply the best. All kinds of varmints and critters around, makes our home cookin', the best all around. Calories? Shucks, we never worry, we take our time. Never in a hurry. A dash of salt, a smudge of curry, a few more herbs...a dash of sherry. Podner, a finer meal you'll never see, than my mom can fix, for her and for me. ok ok so thismay not be the best reply to a challenge, but it's 4:30 in the morning, what do you expect? Sheesh! LoL, ok anyways, that's all buh-bye ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Not bad for 15 minutes work, my dear. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
LOL any poem that makes someone laugh was worth the effort. i liked this one too. critters and varmints eh?? where did you get the inspiration for this??  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Echo for 15 minutes, you spread cheer and smiles. Not bad at all! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Home Cookin' Down South included varmints and critters, too! LOL. But no paper plates... WE had to scrub our lil tin cups down by the creek! *G* Enjoyed, Echo! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you DreamEvil! Roxane...I have NO idea where I got the inspiration for this actually. I think it was the lack of sleep LoL WhtDove...LoL, not all my poems are deep and gloomy LoL Glad it's spreading cheers and smiles!! Suthern...Glad you liked it! ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ [This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 10-01-1999).] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Didja eat any 'o' them critters and varmints? LOL!! Loved the poem. For 15 minutes it is wonderful. ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
delightful Echo and a fun read....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
coming from england this appeals to me. Mmmmm I can taste it now, do write more 15 min' poems they taste soooooo good. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
WildChild...Nope, I didn't, totally fictional poem acept that my mom does make the best food around!! Pepper...Thank you U K Hero...LoL, I'll try ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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