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Under the Night Sky with You |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Fresh sunfish by the lake, Mosquitos having there way. After supper, A long, barefoot walk Down dry, dirt roads Winding naturally with the land. Our sun, Fallen from view, As the rising full moon Assumes her duties, Keeping watch over us all. Late night skinny dipping with mother natures care, Serene body of water All to ourselves, By the midnight stroke. Fish brush by our legs, A failed bite at our feet, Exploring curiosity. We dry by the others warmth, Rolling feverishly, Loudly under the stars, And awaking nothing, Save the passions refining our souls. [This message has been edited by johnt300 (edited 10-01-1999).] |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Well, the imagery was wonderful. I could see perfectly the entire setting.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tyson...I can't wait for this to happen as well as all the other little things life has to offer us. I love this line:"We dry by the others warmth" "very nicely said. This is a well written piece packed full of lovely imagery. I can see it when I read it and so want to share it with you. Love has no bounds Tyson, I believe in us. ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-01-1999).] |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Sounds like you've already been to this place..well done. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful...a walk worth taking ! Jenny |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I have to say this, you two have sure got some energy...*g*...isn't love wonderful, glad you two found each other.. HUGS both ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Sally S., glad you could see it... Hoot, I sure hope this does happen. Waiting is very difficult. Hope to see you. Dragoness, I have not but hope to be, soon. And thank you. JennyLee, Thank you! Rainbow, I am glad, too. Thank you. Tyson |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh so romantic Tyson....what a perfect night you have written..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh so romantic Tyson....what a perfect night you have written..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Thank you Pepper, I appreciate your replies immensely. Tyson |
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