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Don't Get The Wrong Idea
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Don't Get The Wrong Idea |
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Laughter New Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 4moline,Il,usa |
I don't want to lose you but, there's nothing left to say I have to be without you So just walk the other way. Don't turn not for a second, cuz it will make me cry don't tell me that you love me just learn to say good-bye. Don't think that I'm not aching, I'm hurting here for you. Don't think that I don't love you my feelings are all true. The things we share I treasure from the beginning to the end though with the issues and the problems I can't bare to be your friend It may not seem quite fair at all the way I thought this through but as I cried myself to sleep I thought it best to do. No one lets us live our lives to have us be together, they promised as they made it clear that it'd never last forever. They warned me and they threatened not to put them to the test for if I failed to listen they'd put your soul to rest. It didn't seem quite right at all the way they chose to play but with the types of games they pulled they surely got their way. So, don't think that I don't need you there's no one I need more You're still the keeper of my heart the one that I adore. I'll miss the way you held me close, the way you pulled me near, and the ONLY reason that I left you was simply due to fear. dedicated to: Lil' Smokey Tru love only happens Once!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a beautiful dedication  |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Simply Lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very heartfelt sentiments! Enjoyed this much Laughter..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad poem. And very well done too. p.s. a bit of good news, true love can happen more than once! I know, it happened to me! ------------------ Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Heartfelt..  HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful poem, Laughter (I like your name! *G*) Welcome! |
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