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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon 
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If I give you my secrets, will you keep them safe? Or use them against me in a fit of rage? Can you hold them dear so close to your heart? No matter how juicy? No matter how tart? Can you keep my secrets from prying eyes? Can you ask no questions, so I'll tell no lies? Will you love me for me in darkest hours? Will you hold my hand and give me flowers? When life gets tense and rainclouds pour, Can you be there to love even more? Can you take my fears and drive them away? Can you keep my secrets just one more day? Can you kiss my tears and laugh with me? Can you hold my heart so tenderly? Can you always be there to be a friend? Can you be a lover to the very end? I guess it's all just a matter of trust, So trust it is....cuz it's love not lust. By: Wild*Child copyright 6/17/99 ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ohh...well done! Sometimes its so easy to overlook some of the important parts of a great relationship! (only one thing- what about what "you" would be willing to do?) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ohh...well done! Sometimes its so easy to overlook some of the important parts of a great relationship! (only one thing- what about what "you" would be willing to do?) |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
You know when I wrote this I considered that same question and came to the conclusion that if I want to be treated this well I have to treat others the same way and that has been my goal in my marriage since its inception. Sometimes it isn't easy but I try real hard. ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
I loved the poem! ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent...loved this!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Really enjoyed this piece WildChild! Questions of a relationship I think we can all relate too. Well done!! ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Thanks to all of you. I know I don't post often but do enjoy it when I do. Thanks for all the kind words. ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
WildChild: I love this.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely! I enjoyed reading this! ------------------ Denise |
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