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PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

0 posted 1999-10-20 06:01 PM





Whatever I have done to offend you,
Know that I am truly sorry.
You said that I hurt you without telling me why.
Now I just sit and worry.

I think back on old conversations
Can't think of what I have done.
If I hurt you, believe it was done without intent.
My friend, my very best one.

You left me in a parking lot
At that old truck stop on I-184
You looked angry and wouldn't even talk to me.
Chilling my heart to the core.

You said I had hurt you,
But you wouldn't tell me why.
Your blue eyes were blazing like diamond fire
And then you made me cry.

You left me there alone
To contemplate some crime.
I wish I could see things from your view
Now I'm just doin' time.

I must surely be guilty
Else you'd be over your mad.
I have mulled it over and over again in my mind
Can't think of anything bad.

So I guess it's on you
Cuz you've made me sad.
You've been my friend since nineteen-oh-two
Now it's up to you to get glad.

By: WildChild 10/20/99

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie


© Copyright 1999 Shawna R. Holder - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-21 08:58 AM


Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
2 posted 1999-10-21 05:18 PM


Thank you Watcher. It feels good to know that someone is reading as well as writing.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie


Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-21 08:35 PM


I enjoyed this WildChild. Sounds like my first boyfriend! So glad he's history!

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Denise

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