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Open Poetry #3

the carwash

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

0 posted 1999-10-19 08:37 PM

I sat in your car
as you pumped gas
into my veins
was I expecting more
from this one night
of not doing anything...
this one night
of me and you
silence has crept between us
I spend my days wondering
if you still love me
as before
but I recieve
nothings
because there is no time
in the day
for you and me
and the night
brings us together
too tired to love
like we should
but we endure
positive that there will be
a time when we will live
and consume our love
that the fairytail will come
and forever will be ours
because as you pumped gas
I sat in your car
and closed my eyes
to see us kissing under the water
in that carwash

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

1 posted 1999-10-19 09:45 PM

Awwwwwwwe, I like this...Though now I am singing the carwash song LoL.

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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-19 10:40 PM

This is really sweet.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-10-19 10:44 PM

Very nice, Mia. Enjoyable reading.

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